Very good indeed! I mean poetically. Diction-wise too. And with a very positive philosophy of life. There is an occasional VRTTHAM, or at least a THAALAM , so the piece becomes CHOLLABLE, but only here and there, like in a couple of lines but not in an entire stanza-- not even in the penultimate stanza. I would very much like to see a revised version of this otherwise beautiful poem. Hoping you accept my congrats, with this humble suggestion, I remain your admirer.